Andrew's Diamond Jubilee Story
Once upon a time I found a magical bag. I decided to open it but I couldn’t, because the bag was made of plaster. Then I understood it was treasure in there. I took a small toy-hammer and started to hit it. The bag was not easy to break, I asked mummy for help and she gave me her kitchen hammer. The bag was split into pieces and I saw part of the beautiful stones in there. I took my paintbrush and gently brushed these stones. The magic happened I found four beautiful stones there!Then I decided to give these stones to the Queen for her brand new crown to celebrate The Diamond Jubilee.The Queen was very happy to take my stones and she gave me a medal for that and said a big thank you, ‘Andrew’!!!Andrew Lishman (Class 1)
Very good story Andrew aspeshly when your in class one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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