Friday 15 June 2012

Andrew's Diamond Jubilee Story

Once upon a time I found a magical bag. I decided to open it but I couldn’t, because the bag was made of plaster. Then I understood it was treasure in there. I took a small toy-hammer and started to hit it. The bag was not easy to break, I asked mummy for help and she gave me her kitchen hammer. The bag was split into pieces and I saw part of the beautiful stones in there. I took my paintbrush and gently brushed these stones.  The magic happened I found four beautiful stones there!
Then I decided to give these stones to the Queen for her brand new crown to celebrate The Diamond Jubilee.
The Queen was very happy to take my stones and she gave me a medal for that and said a big thank you, ‘Andrew’!!!

Andrew Lishman (Class 1)

2 comments:

  1. Sophia Torrance gale24 June 2012 at 15:09

    Very good story Andrew aspeshly when your in class one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. wow Andrew thats amzing your a really talented writer

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