Friday, 30 March 2012

Rosie's Short Story

Rosie in Class One thought of this fantastic story at home after her birthday party. She told it to her mum and her mum typed it out for her. We think it's amazing! What do you think?

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Rosie who lived on top of a big hill. Rosie had her birthday party. She got some balloons from Rey her friend. One morning when Rosie was getting ready for school she had a quick play in the garden with her balloons. Before she knew what was happening she was lifted into the air by the balloons and started to float up to the sky.

From Rosie's hill she could see her little school and she floated towards it. When she got nearer to Harewood and she saw her little school Rosie let go of one of the balloons so she could float gently down into the playground and she landed next to Mr Madeley.

Rosie said "Good morning Mr Madeley, I floated here without my mummy and daddy." She tied the rest of the balloons to the school gate (and the other one) so that when school had finished that day she untied her balloons and floated back up into the sky. She floated all the way back home to Bardsey and landed at her house and said "Hello everyone I'm back." Mummy and daddy said "We wondered where you had been all day!"

The End.

4 comments:

  1. This is a fabulous story, Rosie! Well done for being the youngest person so far to get work into our Collection.

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  2. Super storie Rosie! You are so talented little girl and I hope to see lots of your books in feature!

    (Andrew's mum)

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  3. You are a very clever girl Rosie, we are very proud of you, a lovely story, Granny & Grandpa. XX

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  4. WOW! Rosie you have a real talent for writing

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