Wednesday 24 October 2012

More Killer Chillers!

X-mas Killer
Francesca Taylor-Draper Y4

It's Xmas Eve and Tommy (my brother) ran downstairs. He saw a sinister lurking creature. In the glint of the lights he saw a gun. Tommy didn't know what to do; he tried to move but he couldn't. He was shivering all over than the brute turned around ....

Rainstorm
Bobby Page Y4

Jack and Tom were waiting for their mum. It had been ten minutes already and they were getting bored. It started raining so they decided to run home. They were nearly home when they saw a house with an open door. They went inside and they were never, ever seen again.

The Ghost House
Harry Stratford Y3

The children opened the door to the house. The cobwebs on the ceiling and creaky floor should have told them to leave but they needed to know the truth. In a second, the house went completely dark - then suddenly the ghost screamed, "Get out of here". So it was true.

By the River Bank
Daisy Pennells Y3

I am alone by a dark bleak river bank. Thick swirling fog makes gruesome figures dance and stretch eerily. Trees creak, twigs crackle, every sound is chilling. Suddenly I hear a blood curdling scream. Whipping my head around, a haunting desperate whisper hangs about my ears. Petrified, I turned and ran!

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